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Storytold Banner by bmansky1 Storytold Banner :iconbmansky1:bmansky1 1 0
LYDIA, a newlywed with a dark secret
HENRY, her husband
ELAINE, Henry's mother
DAVID, Henry's father
JACOBSON, a personal investigator
ROB, an old friend
DORA, Rob's wife
HENRY: This rain is soaking me to the skin. The umbrella's no good. Full of holes. I knew I needed a new one, I just never got around to buying it. The church bell tolls in the distance. We're the picture of melancholy, a group of mourners surrounding a grave, my mother crying softly on my shoulder. I can't find the tears to express what I feel. My father is at confession. I hope it does him some good. The priest looks at the sparse group of mourners. She had no relativesówell, no living relatives. No one but us.
PRIEST: The Lord is my Shepherd; I shall not want. He maketh me to lie down in green pastures; He leadeth me beside the still waters. He restoreth my soul; He leadeth me in the paths of righteousness for His name's sake. Yea, though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death,
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Six Word Stories: Acrimony/Matrimony
"Darling, would you please--"
"Yes, dear."
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Halcyon Days by bmansky1 Halcyon Days :iconbmansky1:bmansky1 2 0
Six Word Stories: Interrogation
"You won't intimidate me!!"
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Six Word Stories: Imminent Threat
One peep, and
they'll find you.
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Inspired: The Harrowing Tale of Hortensia
A young woman named Hortensia loved making art, and practiced crocheting all day long to become the very best in all her town. But one day, she was completely stumped. She looked around her room, full of art pieces featuring mystical bananas, sci-fi landscapes of a futuristic Toledo, and a portrait of Hannah Hart that looked so real, you could start a conversation with it. But nothing inspired her. Had she really created everything there was to create? Depressed, she looked out her window, and made a wish on a nearby lump for inspiration to return to her. The next morning, she sprung out of bed, and used her skill in crocheting to create the most beautiful deviation depicting elbows crying anyone had ever seen. That night, she shouted out the window, "Thanks, lump!"
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i. Word Game
They were playing a word game.
They found O-P-I-A
But not U-T
So they used M-Y
ii. Guns don't kill people homeopathy kills people
It is organic.
It is from flowers.
It has properties that will fix
everything else ever
And you should give it to babies.
iii. Why?
Do they really want to make a difference?
Do they really want change?
Are they jealous of the wealthy?
Are they going insane?
Do the signs they hold have meaning?
Do they know who they're against?
Or are they simply saying that they hate
The (evil) one percent
Because "obscene amounts of money!"
Because "corporate greed!"
Because "people going hungry!"
Because "people in need!"
It really is a problem
It wants to be solved
But there is that bit of one percent
That needs to be absolved
They're not the ones who make the rules
They simply play the game
Along with all the ninety-nine
They slowl
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Six Word Stories: Lab Rats
Feed, then
anesthetize them
to death.
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Tap. Tap. Tap. Tap. Taptaptaptaptaptaptaptaptap…
Her heels click loudly on the rough concrete of the platform. I can't see her—I'm facing track 3, and she's careening down the other side, track 4, the Paoli/Thorndale line, 3:57 local to Malvern. It's currently 4:00 sharp. There's no way she'll make it, it's already started pulling out of the station. She yells fruitlessly against the gleaming aluminum surface, hoping a conductor might hear over the squeal of the wheels in motion.
She means to mutter under her breath, but her voice echoes across the platform, no longer overpowered by the receding chug-a-chug-a-chug (though, I suppose they don't really make that noise anymore, not the newer ones, at least; more of a "clackety-clackety-clack," really).
A picture begins to form. She is a businesswoman and a mother, not yet nearing but still fearing middle age. She wears a navy-blue or black suit-jacket/skirt combo, and her hair is pinned up in a tight bun. I
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Six Word Stories: Life in Seconds
Birth--tick tock tick tock--Death
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Innocence by bmansky1 Innocence :iconbmansky1:bmansky1 0 0 With Grace by bmansky1 With Grace :iconbmansky1:bmansky1 0 0 For the Birds by bmansky1 For the Birds :iconbmansky1:bmansky1 0 2
This is a cliche. I'm running, I'm bounding, I can't look back. The lumbering thing that chases me through a forest of gnarled black trees, around an indoor track the tone of Lovecraft's unnameable color out of space, between towering skyscrapers that twist unnaturally and gleam both in the harsh burn of the sun and the gentle glow of the moon--it grows closer, ever closer, and I can feel its icy breath at my back like a violent gust of wind, tearing at me, pushing me forwards. But none of this is odd. The strangeness lies in the fact that I am self-aware. I have not once in my life had a lucid dream. Why now? Why--
Awake. Thank god. But I can remember it, goddammit. I can remember it. I never remember my dreams. This place is getting to me. I never should've come. I never should've agreed to take that risk, to allow the expedition--and what could've inspired me to follow, to tag along where I had no business being?!
It doesn't matter now. I'm going to die here, die alone. I haven't be
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Six Word Stories: Let There Be Light
Through darkness
nectar of life.
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Artist | Student | Varied
United States
I'm a college student who loves architecture, neuroscience, and long walks on the beach. Actually, medium-length walks on the beach are good too, and only if it's summer. On second thought, the beach isn't really my style. The sand gets all up in my shoes. How about a long walk on a lush, verdant mountain somewhere, somewhere where there are ruins? Sounds good to me.


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JaxBnice Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Professional Artist
You're welcome!
Same-side Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012   Writer

Welcome! :happybounce:
bmansky1 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks, and thanks for the llama:]
ozzla Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012   Writer
Hi there! :wave:

The great critique on Punctuation by ~PrettyThings9 you gave recently a part of your submission to #theWrittenRevolution was featured here.

We hope that you continue contributing such in-depth critiques to our members and that you receive the same in return :salute:

~ tWR administration.
bmansky1 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks for the feature! I really appreciate it:]
ozzla Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012   Writer
No problem! It's important to show such quality comments both in appreciation and to set an example, as such, for others to improve :)
IndigoSkyes Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for joining :iconthewrittenrevolution:, we're delighted to have you with us. Welcome to the revolution. :salute:

We're quite a busy group. We regularly post prompts and publishing opportunities for our members to try, and we've just wrapped up our a second anniversary contest. Don't forget to drop into the chat room as well!

And feel free to add us on Facebook and Twitter. :dummy:
3wyl Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello! :wave:

On behalf of #SixWordStories, I would just like to welcome you to the Group!

We have many ways for you to get involved. If you have past stories, just submit them to Freestyle, and it'll be accepted if it is a proper story. We also have Prompts, but they're a bit more restrictive... More information about them is displayed here. We have listed our guidelines here, which includes our definition on What is a Six Word Story? to help you. ^^;

If there are any queries, please don't hesitate to contact either me or ~mode-de-vie. More of our Happenings are displayed on the right hand side of our page. :love:
bmansky1 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks, I look forward to getting involved:]
NatalieFitzpatrick Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
thank you for the fav :)
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